i will
Friday 16 June 2006
Will I?
rnfields, trees, houses merge in faces ofrnshattered shimmering bloody mud-stainedrnenamel on the cathedral window ledge;rn one pain lower.
breathe,
alone with realms of grass tipped rushesrnfloating on the hostile wind,rnthe stone bridge galloping past-
four flowers spark the afternoonrnsunlight’s glow refracting rnon limp-edged water streaming below thernridden bridge;
loneliness.
Dancernout thernshuttered church door,rnlatched with hookedrnmemorabilia,rnlocked.
seeingrn staringrnWatching clouds freefall throughrnlightning fields withrnone hand clapping the rhythm;
keeping time for fateful failurern -such distinction!-
echoing, throbbing,
Soundless.
rnSomething I’m currently playing with. Need to send Alan a poem or two in the next week or so, just to let him know what kind of poetry I write before class next session, and such. This is something I’m in the process of working on for that purpose. I feel the second half (after ‘loneliness’) isn’t as smooth as the first half… any suggestions? Comments? Ideas? Feedback at all? ^_^
Oh, and a brief piece of advice. If at the beach, with your $700 odd Samsung D500 phone in your pocket, you find yourself walking over the rocks which are coated with slippery slippery algae - avoid falling over. Just don’t do it, as replacing the LCD will cost you $210. Trust me on this one. :s
Alcata’riel.
-Andiyar